13th of September – Intro?

4 thoughts on “13th of September – Intro?”

1. Chris Parsons September 17, 2018 at 1:04 pm

   Cool effect… I’d change it to “WHO ATTACK ON SITE” … sounds better 🙂

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   1. Malban Post authorSeptember 17, 2018 at 1:43 pm

      You are correcting “Which” to “Who” or “Sight” to “Site” :-)?
      Being a German I thought you English guys refered to creatures as “it” and that would correspond to “which” – doesn’t it?
      Third choice would be “that”…

      On the other hand aliens have a personality and are probably not animals in the sense of the word – so perhaps “who” might be better.
      ‘geee what you have to think about, when writing a shooter…

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      1. Philip Eaton September 17, 2018 at 8:39 pm

         ‘Which’ usually follows a comma pause, you should replace ‘which’ with ‘that’.

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      2. Chris Parsons September 18, 2018 at 9:49 am

         Ooops, yes, should be SIGHT still… my bad…

         I still like “Who” but maybe “That” is correct… stupid language English 🙂

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